Thankyou for making this.

one of the best animations on the site, great writing and art. gave me a big smile.

consistency plz

The series has improved a lot but there's still a long way to go. the art seems good and the shading works well however you need to put more effort in to keeping it consistent during animation. although the actual movement is good the characters tend to deform as they change position.
The lip syncing also needs work [the timing is good but the mouth just opens and closes without changing shape].
Another thing that bothers me about this is the facial expressions, often they don't portray the mood well or express character. an easy way to fix this would be to use more eye movement. Just changing the position of the pupils is enough to give a character a little extra depth sometimes.
Backgrounds are also an issue they just seem as if they should have more detail, I wouldn't recommend painted/imported ones just yet as they can take ages to create but just spending a little longer on them usually pays off.
the action sequences were good ,really smooth and you managed to pull off the rotoscoped parts well in this. the voice acting and writing was also up to standard and i look forward to seeing where this will go from here.

spot on.

great work mate, your humor was incredible, the beginning cracked me up. however i think the punchline fell a bit flat.

checkpoints...

...add them... I mean seriously, you can die on level 14 and have to go all the way back to the start [like me :( ]. Also, fix that equipment system.
other than that, this is a good game. good artwork, good idea and good gameplay. needed more testing though.

practice first. then come back to this

the music was a good choice but other than that you need to work on your art for longer before making a tut.
-practice anatomy: the "congrats image" illustrates my point.
-polish your style: maybe choose colors more carefully and possibly cell shade the characters.

brilliantly simple

I just spent the last few hours playing through the rest of the series and I'm slightly ashamed I didn't find out about these games before now. The artwork was stunning which really worked well when setting a mood and the puzzles were actually fun, as opposed to infuriating.
all round enjoyable game here, I hope to see more.
the only improvement I can think of is it would be nice to have a sort of scene select feature to unlock, as it'd be nice to be able to revisit some favorite scenes without replaying the whole game.

Great track. Its really relaxing and chilled out whilst remaining fairly quick and punchy, I'd imagine its a difficult mix to get right but you've nailed it here.

Epic

amazing, one of the best tunes I've heard on the audio portal in a while. my only complaint is I found it got a little repetitive around the middle of the song. apart from that, great work.